Thursday, April 30, 2009

Hey

For those who don't know me I'm Josh. I graduated from Ringling last year. For everyone else, sup :D. So I'm doing a illo about the recent-ish hijacking by somalian pirates and am finding myself in need of some feedback. Here's the sketch (I've done a little more since the scan but not too much) Any comments would help me a lot. Thanks a ton

2 comments:

EL Gato Negro said...

looking pretty good man only concern is the dude in the middle. he almost feels like a kid because of the size. use that tracing paper man and get him in proportion in relation to people in the foreground and background and your in bizzness!!!

Niki López said...

I have to agree with Eric on the middle man, but other than that, this is turning out to be pretty solid compositionally, and I love the drawing of the front man so far! Level up to the maaaaaaaaxxxx.