Thursday, April 30, 2009

Hey

For those who don't know me I'm Josh. I graduated from Ringling last year. For everyone else, sup :D. So I'm doing a illo about the recent-ish hijacking by somalian pirates and am finding myself in need of some feedback. Here's the sketch (I've done a little more since the scan but not too much) Any comments would help me a lot. Thanks a ton

2 comments:

EL Gato Negro said...

looking pretty good man only concern is the dude in the middle. he almost feels like a kid because of the size. use that tracing paper man and get him in proportion in relation to people in the foreground and background and your in bizzness!!!

niki@heynikiniki.com said...

I have to agree with Eric on the middle man, but other than that, this is turning out to be pretty solid compositionally, and I love the drawing of the front man so far! Level up to the maaaaaaaaxxxx.